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第九周阅读训练(2018.06.04~2018.06.10)

阅读训练一
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There are all kinds of trains in the world. There are trains to carry people, trains to carry animals and trains to carry things. There are fast trains and slow trains. Some trains go under the ground and some trains go through hills. In big cities, the streets are usually very busy. So you can find trains under the ground and trains on a rail above the streets. They carry people in and out of the city. Can a train run over water? Yes, it can. There are many bridges over the river. The trains can easily run over the water. But it is not easy to build bridges. Many children have model trains. With the model trains they can build their own rails enjoy the wonderful world of trains.

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( C )1. There are ___________ kinds of trains in the world.

A. a few B. some C. many


  • ( C )2. Usually people like taking_____.

A. fast trains B. slow trains C. trains to carry people


  • ( C )3. In_____cities,the streets are usually busy.

A. tiny B. middle C. large


  • ( A )4. The underground trains carry people_____.

A. in and out of big cities B. in and out of countries C. run over water


  • ( B )5.Many children can enjoy the wonderful world of trains because they_____.

A. have real trains B. have model trains C. often take trains

标准答案:CCCAB


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6. Introduce at trip to your class.要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:When we go to other cities,I prefer to go by trains,because they are fast and convinient.Once I went to Hangzhou,it was a very beautiful city.We ride the bikes around the West lake and we had a good time.Travelling is a nice way to relax,and also a great way to learn about the cultures.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容丰富,逻辑清晰。
2.文章词汇使用要多样些,也能较灵活地使用高级词汇;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
阅读训练二

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Jack had some holidays. He wanted to go to the quiet place by train. He put on his best clothes and took a small bag. He got on the train. The train began to leave. Jack put his head out of the window. The wind blew his hat away. He felt anxious(焦急的).He quickly took his small bag and threw(扔)It out of the window. He said ,“ there's my name and address(地址)on my bag. Someone will find my hat and bag. And he will send me the bag and the hat.”

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( T )1.Jack took the train to the quiet place.
  • ( F )2.Before he got to the train station, the train had gone(离开).
  • ( F )3.The wind blew his small bag away.
  • ( T )4.He quickly threw his small bag out because he could tell someone to send his bag and hat back.
  • ( F )5.Jack didn't like his bag, so he threw it.
标准答案:TFFTF


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Do you agree with the way he retrieved(取回) his hat? And why?要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:I don't agree with it.Because even if someone has seen his bag,but the hat was blown far away,people would not see the hat with the bag.So it is not a good way to get his hat back,and he also wasted his bag.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容较丰富,逻辑清晰
2.有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;单词拼写做的不错;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。

第八周阅读训练(2018.05.29~2018.06.03)

阅读训练一
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Toys are children’s favourite. Children like to play with their toys when they are free. There are many kinds of toys, such as dolls, cars, robots, Lego, puzzles, puppets, Gameboys and so on. Toys are made of different materials(材料).Many toys can really help children think and use their hands. Some toys can make children strong and healthy. But not all the toys are good. Some masks are monster-like. Children are afraid of them. Some people like to keep their toys when they are grown-up. How about you?

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( C )1. Children like _______ best.

A. money B. Gameboys C. toys


  • ( B )2. Children like to play with toys_____.

A. in class B. in free time C. when they do homework


  • ( C )3. Toys are made of different______.

A. wood B. plastic C. materials


  • ( C )4. Children are afraid of______.

A. masks B. monsters C. monster-like masks


  • ( A )5.In the passage, ____ can help children think.

A. Lego and robots B. dolls and cars C. many toys

标准答案:CBCCC


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.What kind of toys do you like?要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:I like lego best.Because it is not only interesting and playful,but can help us think as well.Most teenagers like playing lego because they can relax while playing it.And it is a kind of way to make us cleverer.So I prefer to play lego in our free time.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容较丰富。
2. 过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;能较灵活地使用高级词汇,希望能改善用词单一的情况。
阅读训练二

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Dickens, a great English writer, was born in a small town of England in 1812.When Dickens was nine years old, his family came to London, the capital of England. There were lots of younger children in his family. They were not rich, so their life was hard, and Dickens could not go to school. He didn't go to school until his father came out of prison (监狱). At that time he was twelve years old. But he didn’t finish school.Two years later, he began to work. He often went to the library to read books. He read a lot. Then Dickens wrote lots of novels (小说) and stories all his life. Dickens died over a hundred years ago, but people are still reading his books.

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( F )1.Dickens was a singer.
  • ( T )2.He was born in England.
  • ( F )3.Dickens and his brothers could go to school.
  • ( T )4.Dickens liked reading books.
  • ( T )5.People still read his books now.
标准答案:FTFTT


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.What kind of books do you like to read?要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:I like reading novels,because I feel relaxed while reading these kinds of books.It can be interesting,moving,or exciting.Novels are ususlly very,very long.Some of them even have more than thousands of chapters.Eventhough the books are so thick,I still like reading it because it can give me a lot of fun.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容丰富,逻辑清晰。
2.使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中能较准确地使用高级词汇,但词汇表达仍贫乏;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

第七周阅读训练(2018.05.22~2018.05.27)

阅读训练一
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A rich man and a poor singer live in the same building. The rich man lives on the fifth floor and the singer lives on the fourth floor. The singer likes singing. But the rich man doesn't like that; he likes to sleep.One day, the rich man says to the singer, “I have you a bag of money every month if you stop singing.”“OK.” says the singer. So he stops singing and becomes a rich man. But he isn't happy. He wants to sing. At last, the singer says to the rich man, “Here’s your money. I don’t want your money, and I want to sing every day. "He starts to sing again and he is happy.

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( B )1. The rich man and the poor singer live in_______.

A. the same room B. different floors C. different buildings


  • ( B )2. The rich man likes _______.

A. money B. to sleep C. the singer’s songs


  • ( A )3. The rich man gives money to the singer; he wants him to______.

A. stop singing B. sing for him C. be a good friend of him


  • ( C )4. At last, the singer wants________.

A. much money B. to sleep C. to sing again


  • ( B )5._________can make the singer happy.

A. Money B. Singing C. Sleeping

标准答案:BBACB
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Do you think happiness is important for us? Why?要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:I think healthy is the most important thing to us.Because if we are healthy,we can do anything we like and we can be free.Eventhough we have a lot of money,we are unhealthy,that is not good for us as well.

点评:
1.注意审题“happiness”。
2.可以尝试从健康就是快乐的角度出发。


阅读训练二

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What are those little green lights on the grass flying in the yard? Are they monsters? Are they UFOS? No, they aren’t monsters and they aren’t UFOS. They are fireflies(萤火虫). Fireflies are little insects that glow(发光) with a cool green light. If you touch one, it won't burn you. Frogs, bats and birds don't like to eat animals that glow. The glow helps fireflies keep safe. Sometimes we call fireflies glowworms. You can catch fireflies and keep them in a jar, but don’t forget to let them go away.

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( T )1.The little green lights can fly.
  • ( F )2.Fireflies are UFOS.
  • ( F )3.If you touch the green light, it will burn you.
  • ( T )4.Some fireflies protect themselves by the light.
  • ( T )5.Birds don't like to eat glowing animals.
标准答案:TFFTT


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.What other animals can glow? Please introduce it.要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:There is a kind of fish that can glow.People call it as"glowing fish". They live deep in the water and they can make cool lights. Just like the fireflies,their ligts are not used to make them beautiful, the lights are used to protect themseves.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容较丰富。
2.请检查themseves,确认拼写正确。请检查ligts,确认拼写正确。

第六周阅读训练(2018.05.01~2018.05.06)

阅读训练一
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Dear Danny,
Welcome to China next week! Now I want to tell you about Chinese meals(膳食).We Chinese people have three meals every day. We have breakfast at about 7: 00.We have eggs, bread, noodles, milk, or other food for breakfast. Lunch is a big meal of a day in China. We always have lunch at about 12. 00. Students have lunch at school on school days. Workers have lunch at their companies(公司). We have rice, vegetables, meat, soup, or other food for lunch. We always have dinner at home at about 6: 0 P. m. We have rice, vegetables, fish and meat. The dinner is usually big too.
In a word I think Chinese food is very delicious. Please remember to have some Chinese food when you come to China. I hope you will like it.

Your friend,
Peter

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( B )1. Peter wants to tell Danny about________.

A. Chinese clothes B. Chinese meals C. Chinese festivals


  • ( C )2. ________ people have ________meals every day.

A. Western, four B. Chinese, four C. Chinese, three


  • ( A )3. In China both________and________are big meals.

A. lunch, dinner B. breakfast, lunch C. breakfast, dinner


  • ( C )4. Students have________.

A. lunch at school at weekends B. breakfast at school on school days C. lunch at school on school days


  • ( A )5.Who will come to China next week?

A.  Danny. B. Peter. C. Peter's sister.

标准答案:BCACA


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Introduce a Chinese cuisine(美食) to your foreign friend.要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:In China,There is a lot of delicious food.So today,I will introduce the mooncake i,it is my favorite food in China.Mooncake looks like a circle,because it means moon.We often eat it during the Mid-autumn Festival.We celebrate it to honor a lady called ChangE.The mooncake is usually sweet,and sometimes it can be salty.I like all the flavours.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容丰富完整,逻辑清晰,语句通顺,非常棒。
2.注意“there”的大小写,
阅读训练二

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Birds live in trees. But do you know that some frogs live in trees too? Look, there are some tree frogs in the tree. Can you find them?We can' t find the frog easily(容易地). Because the frogs can change colours. On the green leaves, it is green. On a brown branch, it changes to brown. Some tree frogs can change from green to golden or blue. The frogs have legs and strong feet. They will stick in the tree and will not fall from trees. They make different noises in spring and summer. One frog can make a noise like a dog and another frog can make a noise like a bird.

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( F )1.The frogs are all green.
  • ( T )2.They have strong feet so they will not fall.
  • ( F )3.All the frogs live in the water.
  • ( F )4.All the frogs live in the water.
  • ( T )5.Some frogs can make a noise like a dog.
标准答案:FTFFT


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Introduce a country’s national treasure animal.要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:The panda is the national treasure animal in China.It is black and white,just look like a cute doll.It only eats bamboos,but it eats a lot,so the number of pandas soon become very few.To be a good citizen,we should protect the pandas and other animals,not hurting them.

点评:
1.语句通顺,中心明确,内容丰富。
2.句子正确率很高,拼写很棒,希望能再接再厉。

第五周阅读训练(2018.04.24~2018.04.29)

阅读训练一
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China is a big country, so the weather in the south is quite different from that in the north. In Shanghai, we have warm and wet spring, hot summer, cool autumn and cold winter. But in some parts of China, such as Hainan, Guangdong and Yunnan, it is always warm and hot there. People never see snow there. In winter, a lot of tourists come to Hainan, and enjoy the sunshine at the beach. Many people like to go to Yunnan, too. Because the weather there is warm and is like spring in all the seasons. But some people like cold weather. In the north of China, children can make snowmen and play with snowballs. It is fun to play outside while it is snowing. That’s why more people come to Harbin in winter to spend their holidays there.

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( B )1. In winter it’s very cold in the north, but it’s_______in the south.

A. cold B. warm C. cool


  • ( B )2. Many people go to Hainan to ______in winter. 

A. see the sun B. enjoy the sunshine C. play with snowballs


  • ( C )3. _____is in the north of China.

A. Yunnan B. Guangdong C. Harbin


  • ( C )4. Children can make snowmen when it is______.

A. raining B. wind C. snowing


  • ( A )5.The weather is so different in China because our country is____.

A.  big B. small C. beautiful

标准答案:BBCCA


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.What’s your favorite weather? Why?要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:I like snowy weather very much.Because when it is snowing,we can see a beautiful senery made of white snow.For children like us,we enjoy snowy weather because we can do fun activities at this kind of weather.We can build a snowman,have a snowball fight and so on.I expect a snowy winter and looking forward to seeing the fabulous snow.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容丰富,逻辑清晰。注意“senery ”单词拼写
2.高级词汇使用较熟练;全文结构较为严谨。
阅读训练二

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Hank lived in a small town, but then he got a job in a city and moved there with his wife and his two children. On the first Saturday in their new home, Hank took his new red car out of the garage(汽车间) and was washing it when a neighbour came by. When he saw Hank’s new car, the neighbour stopped and looked at it for a minute. Then Hank turned and saw him. The neighbour said, “That’s a nice car.Is it yours?” “Sometimes.”Hank answered. The neighbour was surprised. “Sometimes?” he said,“What do you mean?” “Well,” answered Hank slowly, “when there’s a party in the town, it belongs(属于) to my daughter, Jane. When there's a football game somewhere, it belongs to my son, Joe. When I’ve washed it, and it looks really nice and clean, it belongs to my wife. And when it needs gas(汽油), it’s mine.”

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( F )1.Hank lives in a small town now.
  • ( T )2.Hank got a job in a city and moved there with his family.
  • ( T )3.Jane used the car when she went to parties.
  • ( T )4.Hank had two children.
  • ( F )5.Hank and his family had three cars.
标准答案:FTTTF


(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Who is your favorite teacher?Why?要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:My favorite teacher is my English teacher,Miss Zhang.She is a very patient teacher and she is also very kind to us.In English class,we learn new words and learn fun stories.Miss Zhang always tells us great stories after we finished the classes,so that English becomes my favorite subject.

点评:
1.中心明确,内容完整,语句通顺。
2. 句法很棒,词汇表达较丰富多样。

第四周阅读训练(2018.04.17~2018.04.22)

阅读训练一
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My dad works from Monday to Friday in a bank. He uses the computer to count money. His job is very important. So he is an important man in the bank. Dad is also busy at home. At weekends he cooks dinner. Usually he cooks Italian food. On Sundays he makes spaghetti(意大利面条). He makes pizza. Sometimes he cooks chicken and makes Chinese food. My mum watches and helps. I help my dad too. I wash the dishes. Many people think it’s strange for a man to cook. My dad enjoys his hobby. Cooking relaxes him. He is a weekend cook.

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( B )1. What does the writer’s dad do?

A. He is a cook. B. He is a bank clerk. C. C. He has no job.


  • ( C )2. What does the writer’s dad cook?

A. He cooks Italian food. B. He cooks Chinese food. C. Both A and B.


  • ( B )3. ________ have in groups.

A. On Mondays. B. At weekends. C. On Sundays.


  • ( B )4. What’s the writer’s dad’s hobby?

A. Swimming. B. Cooking. C. Working.


  • ( A )5.Which of the following is Italian food?

A. The pizza. B. The dumpling. C. The hamburger.

(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Prepare a healthy breakfast for yourself要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:Breakfast is the most important meal in a day.For a healthy breakfast,we should eat some bread,some milk and an apple.We should not skip breakfast,because it might be bad for our body.Our body needs energy,so the breakfast can give our body enough energy.A healthy breakfast can make us healthy and energetic.

点评:
1.观点正确,内容丰富,逻辑清晰!
2.单词拼写很好,继续保持。
阅读训练二

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An old tiger lived in the forest. He didn’t want to look for food. He often told other animals to bring him something to eat. He saw a monkey and said. “I am hungry, Monkey. Go to the village and bring me a fat pig.”
 “Oh, Tiger, ” said the monkey. "I can’t do that now. There is another tiger over there. He also wants to get a fat pig. He will not let me get anything for you to eat. I’m afraid of him. ” 
 “What? ” said the old tiger. “Show me that tiger. I want to talk to him.”
 “ Come with me,” said the monkey. The monkey and the tiger got to a bridge over the river.
 “Now look down at the river,” said the monkey,
 “Do you see the head, the white teeth and large green eyes of a tiger? ”
  “Yes, I do. ” cried the old tiger, “I will eat him up. ” With these words, the tiger jumped into the water.

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( T )1.The old tiger wants a fat pig to eat.
  • ( T )2.The old tiger wants to look for food with the monkey.
  • ( F )3.The tiger is afraid of the monkey.
  • ( F )4.There is another tiger in the river.
  • ( T )5.The monkey is clever.
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Is there another tiger in the river?Why would the monkey do that? And how does the monkey do? 要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:There wasn't a tiger in the river.It is just the shadow of the old tiger.The monkey would do that because he deos not like the tiger,and he does not want to hurt the pig.The idea is very fantastic,the smart monkey treats the tiger with a little lie and makes the tiger into death.

点评:
1.观点正确,逻辑清晰,内容丰富,善于使用高级词汇!
2.“hurt pig”“treat tiger”为中式英语,“belived”注意单词拼写。

第三周阅读训练(2018.04.10~2018.04.15)

阅读训练一
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Both people and insects are animals. But insects don’t have bones in their body. They have a hard shell. Insects are different from other animals because they have six legs. Many insects have wings. Some insects live alone. Others live in big groups. Bees and ants live in groups. They live in big families and they have many different rooms in their nest. Insects live in dry places. In hot places, insects are everywhere you see. A few insects, but not too many live in oceans. In very cold places, like the North Pole (北极), they live in the fur(皮毛) of polar bears and other big and warm animals. Quite a lot of insects live in small rivers and lakes.

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( A )1. Insects don't have_______.

A. bones B. wings C. a hard shell


  • ( C )2. Insects have__________ legs.

A. two B. four C. six


  • ( C )3. ________ have in groups.

A. Bees B. Ants C. Both A and B


  • ( A )4. A few Insects live in_______.

A. oceans B. rivers C. lakes


  • ( C )5.In the North Pole,insects live________.

A. everywhere B. in oceans C. in the fur of polar bears

(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.According to your observations(观察), which insects have you seen in your daily life? Where do they usually appear(出现)?Please share one example from your life about insects. (such as shape,habitat,tc.)要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:I often see many ants near my home.I usually find them on the road.They are so small that I often think that they look like a long black line which can move quickly.They are very united and they always solve prolems easily,using all of them's mind.

点评:
1.观点正确,语句通顺,能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒
2.第七组在你的带领下,表现很好,希望能继续保持。
阅读训练二

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Tom is seven. He goes to school every day. The school is near his home. So he goes there on foot and comes back home on time. But today he is late. His mother asks him, “Why are you late today?” Tom asks his mother, “I was in the teachers’ office.” His mother says, “Why did you go to the teachers' office?” “Because my teacher asked us a question in class, and nobody could answer it, but I could.” Tom replied to his mother. His mother says, “It's good to answer the question.” Tom says,“But” the question was “Who puts ink on my chair?”

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( T )1.Tom lives near his school.
  • ( F )2.He goes to school and comes back home by bike every day.
  • ( T )3.Today Tom was late for school.
  • ( T )4.Tom put some ink on the teacher's chair.
  • ( T )5.The boy is very naughty
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.Give Tom some suggestion. Please list the good habits / bad habits for school. 要求不少于6句话,50个单词。
答:Tom should not be so naughty like this.He shouldn't put ink on the teacher's chair.If I were him,I will apologize to the teacher and promise that I won't do it anymore.After then,he should stuty harder and be a nice student,he is growing and growing,so his mind should be growing too.

点评:
1.观点正确,内容丰富。能从内容中看出你是一位聪明懂事的女孩,继续加油!
2.采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误。
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第二周阅读训练(2018.04.03~2018.04.08)

阅读训练一
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Do you know what parrots are? They are birds. They are usually bright, colourful and nice, and of course some can talk. Now, look at these fish. They are also bright, colourful and nice. People call them parrot fish, of course they are different from parrots, they can not talk. Parrot fish live in warm sea water near the coral(珊瑚). They help to clean the coral. They eat very small plants on the coral. This helps the coral grow. There are about 60 kinds of parrot fish in the world. They can change colours when they grow. Males(雄性) and females(雌性)have different colours.

问题区:

(一)根据短文,回答以下问题
1.Can parrot fish talk?
答:Some of them can talk.

点评: 原文Of course they are different from parrots, they can not talk.


2.Where do parrot fish live?
答:They live in warm sea water near the coral.


3.What can parrot fish help the coral do?
答:They help the coral grow.


4.How many kinds of parrot fish are there in the world?
答:60.


5.Do males and females look the same or different?
答:They look different.

标准答案:
1.No, they can’t.
2.They live in warm sea water near the coral.
3.They can help to clean the coral./They eat small plants on the coral.
4.There are about 60 kinds of parrot fish in the world.
5.Males and females look different.
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.(个人问题) What other fish do you know? Please introduce it.(such as shape,habitat(栖息地),food and species(种类) etc.)
要求不少于6句话,50个单词。


答:The shark is such a kind of fierce fish.It eats other small fish to live.They live in the deep sea and have a great sight.I am afraid of sharks because they look so scary!

点评:
1.中心明确,句子完整,逻辑清晰。
2.字数不足。
阅读训练二

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It's Saturday. The sun is shining. Jack and Jane go to the Peoples Park. There are many people in the park. Some are walking and some are singing and dancing. The children are playing ball games. There are some foreigners(外国人), too. They are from Germany(德国). They are talking with the students in English. They are all happy.

问题区:

(一)根据短文内容选择合适的答案

  • ( B )1. What day is it today?

A. Sunday B. Saturday C. Friday

  • ( C )2. What's the weather like today?

A. Cloudy B. Rainy C. Sunny

  • ( C )3. What are the children doing?

A. Singing and dancing B. Taking a walk C. Playing ball games

  • ( A )4. Where do the foreigners come from?

A. Germany B. America C. Japan

  • ( A )5.Are there many people in the park?

A. Yes, there are B. No. there aren’t C. Sorry, I don't know

标准答案:BCCAA
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.(个人问题)What do you often go to the park with? What are you doing in the park?
要求不少于6句话,50个单词。


答:I often go to the park with my family and my friends.There is a beautiful large park nearby,and we like going to that park.If the weather is pleasant,we will have a picnic on the soft grass.How nice it will be having a picnic with the butterflies aruond!

点评:
1.中心明确,语句通顺,层次分明!
2.注意单词拼写。


第一周阅读训练(2018.03.27~2018.04.01)

阅读训练一
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It was a fine day. The weather was very hot. There was no rain for a long time. The ground was dry. The plants were dry and brown. There wasn’t any water in the river. The sun was shining. The animals were thirsty. They were under the tree. They were very hot. There were some birds on the branches. The birds were thirsty too. "I must have some water! A crow said to herself. Just then, she saw a jug. Is there any water in the jug?" She flew to the jug. She looked into the jug. There was some water in it. She could see the water inside, but she couldn’t reach it. The jug was very big and the crow was weak. She wanted to knock the jug down. "What can I do? The crow thought. Oh! There are some little stones on the path. I have an idea! "The crow was glad. She could put the little stones into the jug. The animals laughed at her. A zebra and a giraffe came and looked at the crow. The crow got the water at last. She thought, Yes, I’m tired, but I’m not thirsty! The animals thought,“ She isn’t stupid(愚蠢的).She' s very clever.” This story says: Hard work brings good things.

问题区:

(一)判断下列句子是否符合短文内容,符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”

  • ( T )1. The weather was fine and hot.
  • ( F )2. The animals were very hungry and hot.
  • ( F )3. The crow could reach the water into the jug at first.
  • ( F )4. There are no stones on the path.
  • ( F )5. The crow is stupid.
标准答案:TFFFF
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.(个人问题) According to your own experience, talk about how you can get good results through "Hard work brings good things".
答:I think it is true.The crow can reach the water because she is hardworking enough.If we want to be a successful person,we must work or study hard,so that we will have good luck.

点评:
1.中心明确,句子正确。
2.建议积累衔接词。
阅读训练二

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Jill is a doctor. She loves music. She plays the banjo (班卓琴). She plucks(拨)the strings to play the songs she likes best. Pluck, pluck, pluck. She can play all day long. She wants to play on the stage(舞台).The lights shine on her as she plays her banjo. All her friends come to see. It is her favourite dream. Her younger brother, Danny, is a police officer. He likes music too. He plays the drums with his sticks. He makes rat-a-tat sounds. He and Jill play different musical instruments(乐器). But they sound great. Maybe they will start a band(乐队)one day. They will be popular.

问题区:

(一)根据短文,回答以下问题
1.Does Jill play the banjo?
答:Yes,she does.


2.What does Jill want to do?
答:She wants to play the banjo on the stage.


3.What does Danny do?
答:He is a police officer.


4.Which musical instrument does Danny play?
答:He plays the drums.


5.Are their musical instruments the same or different?
答:They are different.

标准答案:
1.Yes,she does.
2.She wants to play banjo on the stage.
3.He is a police officer.
4.He plays the drum.
5.Their musical instruments are different.
(二)根据要求,写一段短文

6.(个人问题)Do you like art, such as music, art, dance, etc.? Share an interesting thing with your art course.
答:I like art very much.It can make me feel relaxed.I like playing the flute.It is very interesting for me.I enjoy playing it and it becomes my hobby.I will keep on learning it for I really like this a lot.

点评:
1.中心明确,高级词汇使用比较恰当,表达灵活多变。
2.句法知识不错。